Professional speaker Nate Dunlop recommends you develop your metaphors by:
- Give the speech to people who know what you are talking about without using metaphors and make sure they understand it
- Give the speech to people who don't know what you are talking and use metaphors to get your points across. Get feedback on which metaphors made sense and which they didn't understand.
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