World Champion Speaker Pres Vasilev suggests you develop conflict and dialogue in your character:
- External - conflict between two people or two groups of people, and the dialogue they have with each other
- Internal - conflict inside one person and the back and forth dialogue the person has as they think out what to do
- Non-personal - conflict from some non-person (e.g., force of nature) against a person or persons and the imagined dialogue of the non-person (e.g., "It was like the rain was saying to me, 'You're not gonna get dry today, sucker!' "
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